One hot hot day we went to the the river but when we got there was no water
My friends dad boat was stuck in the dry river we got a broken wood and help them down and me and my friends were say water water we want a drink plz can we have a drick then it was raining the river did not get full up to the top me rose and lily were sad and saying help then my mum gave us some cups of water we had some water and rose sayed I did not like that…
Hi Haylee,
YOUR STAR IS – i LIKE HOW YOU DID SOME SPECIFIC NAMES.
YOUR STAR IS – I LIKE HOW YOU STARTED WITH A DIFFERENT START.
YOUR WISH IS – TO PUT FOOL STOPS IN AT THE END OF A SENTENCE
nice job
I loved your story it was so creative and I can not wait to hear more from you and you know how your name is Haylee well… my name is Haylee to and we spell it the same way!!!