Daisy’s Wk 4 100wc

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A party had started laughter and cheer had started in the room. It was my best friend’s mum’s birthday. The room was filled of cheer it started to get loud so I went out side. My friend flood behind me we started talking we got a couple of friend. We started to play would you or would you rather. My friend came up with a really silly one. She said “would you or would you rather eat moldy cheese or moldy bacon”. “So I said I would eat moldy cheese”. After the game we went inside and started to party.


Connor’s Wk 4 100wc

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When I went to school I played tip with my friends and I went to run but I slipped two kids laughed at me but my friends stuck up for me. I started to laugh at them they started to cry of laughter when I went home and the same happened again today but I didn’t trip over my friend tripped over the same kids laughed and they ran away from us they stopped. I pulled them to the side and I said “shush” I practically shaved there life they were scared! but this is my story finished! By Connor!


Week 4 100wc Prompt

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The 100wc Team says:

For the prompt this week, I thought we would do something a little different. Rather than having part of a sentence or some individual words we have a theme. You can take it anywhere you want to! it is:

LAUGHTER

You could tell your readers what makes you laugh or how you feel when you laugh. you might like to recount a funny story to make your readers laugh. Bring tears to our eyes!

 

Remember to: 

  • Re read your prompt to make sure it makes sense!
  • Revise – by changing some words around, adding more descriptive and interesting words.
  • Edit- Check and double check your spelling and punctuation. Remember capital letters for names and beginning of sentences. Think about your end of sentence punctuation mark, is it a question, an exclamation showing strong feeling or a full stop?
  • Then find a partner to read your story and make any changes you think would work after hearing your partner’s feedback.
  • ENJOY WRITING YOUR HILARIOUS YOUR STORY!